Tonight I stood crying
silent tears in the shower,
my anger and sadness
mixed in with the water.
When I stepped out and dried
myself off in the mirror,
my eyes held emotions
that couldn't be clearer.
They held the hatred for him
for all he did upon me,
and the pain from grieving
for the girl I used to be.
π
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Unseen emotions…Love this:)
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Thank you for the love β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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I love the part where anger and sadness mixed with water. While it can hide the tears, eyes never lie. Beautifully tragic piece!
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Exactly β€οΈ Thank you Matt π
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Strong – and I love the title too.
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Thank you!!! β€οΈ
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You’re the intense & divine fire….mixed with tears in steamy shower….the mirror showed your reflection clearer….but if you look into the heart deeper….you know well, you’re nothing but pure love, oh my dear….I can sense the depth, your eyes are deep ocean….keep expressing dear Hal, you’re burning desire β€οΈπ₯β¨π
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Thank you so so much for those words Navin β€οΈ They truly mean a lot.
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Holy Hal! I thought you were talking about me… hummm…
Very well written, powerful read. As always a pleasure to read you.
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ππ Be glad I’m not talking about you lol
Thank you Mr. Priest!!! β€οΈ
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A poem full of hurt. I can feel the emotions. And this came out beautifully πππ
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Thank you for the love β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Itβs always my pleasure πππ
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Powerful. Love the imagery β€
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Thank you so much β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Of course π
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It just breaks my heart to read such a words. I am sorry that you have to bear all this. Sometimes letting go and moving on with life is a blessing. May God bless your heart and your sole. Have a great day π
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Don’t be sorry π Sometimes feeling the pain in that moment and then letting it go is the best thing. Thank you for your words β€οΈβ€οΈ Have a great day!
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Bless your sole for staying strong. I wish you the best
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Thank you very much β€οΈπ
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I have felt this. Good job!
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Thank you β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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You’re welcome! π
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Tell me one thing Hal : are you receiving notification of my new posts? I posted a TEST POST yesterday. Seems like an issue after my blog update. Thx for your help in advance ππ
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No… I’m not getting anything on my side at all. I tried to comment on one of your posts and it wouldn’t let me hit submit either… let me know if you need me to test anything for you!!!!
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Thanks a million for your reply dear Hal. I’ll have a look at it & will let you know if this needs to be tested againπβ€οΈ
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Okay!! No problem!! Just shoot me a message!! π
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Hey Hal, let me know if you’ve received a notification. I’ve just published a post. Thank you kindly for your help.
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Still nothing… I scrolled all over… The only way I can find you it’s by searching your name.
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Grrr….It’s driving me crazy ππ₯
Thanks for your help β€οΈ
I’ve just posted a new test post.
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No problem! Its still not showing up for me. I even made sure I hadn’t accidently unfollow you or something
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Very powerful. I felt the same way many years ago.
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Thank you! β€οΈ Hope you’re doing better now
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Yes it was many many years ago and life is great right now.
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Happy for you ππ
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Dont ever let him see ur precious tears dear Hal. Let those feelings go in the shower and down the drain. If he cant see the “love” that u r, then he doesn’t deserve ur time or presence. Chin up luv, “true love” is waiting for u around the cornerπ
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Thank you β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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the warring faction within…we know we must let it go, but the mind plays out wicked scenarios of payback….
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Yes. Everything I sometimes wish I could do.
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