Last Call

They asked me 
whether or not 
she could still hear... 

So I held my phone 
patiently against a 
dying woman's ear... 

Originally posted 12/12/20

October 25, 2022 by Anonymously Hal Categories: My PoetryTags: Death, Dying, Family, Nursing, Poetry 19 Comments

19 thoughts on “Last Call”

christopher marc says:

Oct 25, 2022 at 10:06 am

Your writing is intense. I am fucked up too.

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- Anonymously Hal says:
  
  Oct 25, 2022 at 5:18 pm
  
  Thank you 🖤 Being fucked up just makes us more interesting 😏
  
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  - christopher marc says:
    
    Oct 25, 2022 at 5:25 pm
    
    🖤
    
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  - christopher marc says:
    
    Oct 25, 2022 at 7:27 pm
    
    “Rebellion cannot exist without a strange form of love”
    
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  - Anonymously Hal says:
    
    Oct 29, 2022 at 9:46 am
    
    🖤🖤🖤🖤
    
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rubycommenting says:

Oct 25, 2022 at 11:27 am

I really love this one! 😊 💕

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- Anonymously Hal says:
  
  Oct 27, 2022 at 6:55 am
  
  Thank you!!!
  
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mic says:

Oct 25, 2022 at 12:45 pm

😯👌👌👌✒🤗🌹

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- Anonymously Hal says:
  
  Oct 27, 2022 at 7:08 am
  
  Thank you 🖤🖤🖤🖤
  
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  - mic says:
    
    Oct 27, 2022 at 12:24 pm
    
    🤗
    
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Navin says:

Oct 25, 2022 at 4:48 pm

❤️

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- Anonymously Hal says:
  
  Oct 27, 2022 at 7:08 am
  
  ❤️❤️
  
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𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🪐 says:

Oct 26, 2022 at 2:12 am

😟😟 no words.

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- Anonymously Hal says:
  
  Oct 29, 2022 at 9:46 am
  
  Nope 😐
  
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DD says:

Oct 29, 2022 at 5:03 am

If only we would all do such things

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- Anonymously Hal says:
  
  Nov 01, 2022 at 3:36 am
  
  ❤ ❤ ❤
  
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Susi Bocks says:

Nov 20, 2022 at 5:44 pm

Oof! That took the wind out of my sails. Good job, Hal!

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- Anonymously Hal says:
  
  Nov 26, 2022 at 3:18 am
  
  Thank you Susi!!!!
  
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  - Susi Bocks says:
    
    Nov 26, 2022 at 11:39 am
    
    You’re very welcome, Hal!
    
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