Your rough exterior was so
sharp and sour to me.
Intense and unforgiving.
But as I let you sit on my tongue…
Slowly you melted away into
something so suddenly sweet.
Leaving me with a hunger
and only wanting more.
Your rough exterior was so
sharp and sour to me.
Intense and unforgiving.
But as I let you sit on my tongue…
Slowly you melted away into
something so suddenly sweet.
Leaving me with a hunger
and only wanting more.
Anonymously Hal 
Just don’t kill me yourself, Hal….isn’t it amazing how your words can rip open my chest & hit the heart?….this craving is one of the biggest things that’s been eating me away slowly….where my hunger is beyond descriptions….the moment I read your lines….I could sense what you’re going through….as in what I’ve been feeling….the mirror could be a wonderful thing β€οΈπ€
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Yeah I think you understand me here… Getting a taste of something so good… And then it’s gone just as fast… And all you want it more. π Thank you Navin β€οΈ
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Tell me about it…just the way you’ve written this, takes me there…just like you go there as well….β€οΈ
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Wow!
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LOL. I read them every time!! πππ They’re the best bit lol. Also love writing subtle jokes there βΊοΈ.
I absolutely love sweet & sour pork balls from the Chinese too, btw!
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Pork balls?! π
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hmm… cool B-)
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Thank you π
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It was exciting, it was bold & it was truly impeccable! Thanks for sharing such a delightful post. Always a pleasure to read your words. π
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π Thank you Sidharth!!! Glad you enjoyed it!
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So amazing! I absolutely love the images you use πππ
(also 10/10 tag πβ€)
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Thank you!!!! Haha!!!!!!! Finally someone reads them!! πππ β€οΈ
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Haha you’re welcome πβ€
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Wow. Love this… You captured it so well
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Thank you!!!!!
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My pleasure:)
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This reminds me so much of someone. Amazing work!
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Thank you!!!
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