When the storm closes in
and the lightning finally strikes…
Will you hold me a bit closer
or reach for the knife?
Just know I’ll understand
if you do decide to smite…
Because I was the thunder
that led to this night.
When the storm closes in
and the lightning finally strikes…
Will you hold me a bit closer
or reach for the knife?
Just know I’ll understand
if you do decide to smite…
Because I was the thunder
that led to this night.
Anonymously Hal 
this is intense with emotion. Looks like a cold murder scene.
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Thank you!!!! It does doesn’t it?
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Your welcome. Yes it does
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Excellent!!!
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Thank you!!
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Your writing is amazing, Hal! The last stanza is awesome.
Hope all is well ❤
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Thank you! I liked it too! ❤️❤️❤️
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Oh my….what a beautiful piece….intense….”Because I was the thunder
that led to this night.”….so many emotions in your poem….absolutely magnificent, Hal 🔥❤️
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Thank you so much Navin ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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You’re quite welcome Hal ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Wow Hal! ✨✍️ It’s good to see your poems frequently 😍 loved it ✨
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Thank you!!! ❤️❤️
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loooooooove this
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Thank you!! It loves you too 🙂
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awwww 😊
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Amazing 😍 love your blog ❣️
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Thank you so much!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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