Sometimes I wish I could
wipe away my memories of you.
Like writings on a chalkboard.
Leaving nothing behind but
fine white dust
and faded broken outlines.
But I know that even if my mind
could somehow be erased…
I’d still remember
every part of your face.
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Forgetting someone so dear to you is too hard. This is a brilliant piece ππ
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Yes it is. Thank you so much β€οΈ
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Itβs my pleasure reading your posts! π
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This is so beautifully written. But remember, you are so strong, and even if you remember everything, you will be able to crush it and focus on what’s important. If not now, soon. β€β€β€
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Thank you so much! Yeah… Eventually I’ll be able to move on. It just takes time π
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You can and will do it, Hal!! Keep doing you π€π
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Stunningly accurate my friend.
Love it ππ€
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Thank you β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Welcome as always π€
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Beautiful ending, and so true though!β€οΈ
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Thank you. Glad you agree πβ€οΈ
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Always my pleasure to read your work π
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β€οΈ Thank you!!! πβ€οΈ
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Well Done Hal βοΈβ¨Have a Beautiful Friday β¨π€
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Thank you! Have a beautiful Sunday π
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Oh man….What can I say….the feeling of your poem “Erased”….leaves the sensation that I too can relate….if it were easy to make the feelings evaporate…..but it’s engraved all over the face of my phase…..I’m loving your poem, it’s worth more than just some praise β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Haha thank you!!!! πππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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You’re welcome β€οΈβ€οΈβ¨β¨
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nicely done
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Thank you βΊοΈ
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Great word selection and analogy… love the chalkboard and white dust…
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Thank you!! β€οΈ
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you are welcome!
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