Go ahead.
Bottle up
your broken promises
and empty oaths…
Seal it tight
with glue made
from your ghosts.
Hide it safe
and don’t ever
let it shatter…
Your words
to me will never
fucking matter.
Go ahead.
Bottle up
your broken promises
and empty oaths…
Seal it tight
with glue made
from your ghosts.
Hide it safe
and don’t ever
let it shatter…
Your words
to me will never
fucking matter.
Anonymously Hal 
‘Seal it tight…ghosts’
Anger well expressed.
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Thank you ❤️
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“your words to me will never f**** matter!!” Strong lines. Well done Hal✍️
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🙌 Thank you Simon!
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This is full of hurt and anger. You write too good!
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😁 Thank you so much!!!!
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My pleasure reading 😀
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The moment I read the title “Bottled”….I knew it’s gonna bring the explosive material…strong lines…quite beautiful actually….crazy power behind these lines….”Seal it tight with glue made from your ghosts.”….loving the whole poem & the flow….I hope that you’re doing good ❤️
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Thank you 🙂 I was feeling fiesty when I wrote it lol!! I’m doing good! Hope you’re doing good too and staying safe out there!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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Ok…I’m glad to know…I’m not doing so bad….You too stay safe….we need you & your poetry….said I & my precious ❤️
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I’m trying… Kind of in a rut lately… The usual I guess lol. Thank you Navin ❤️❤️
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I understand ❤️❤️
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Fucking love it my friend 🖤🖤
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Thank you!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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You’re as welcome as always 🖤
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My kind of poem.
Lots of passion 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you!! 🙌
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nice…! *sips scotch*
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Thanks! *Sips rum*
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welcome!! *eyes your rum, too* lol
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*steals sip of whiskey* 😁 Refreshing!
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“look over there!” *does same to your rum* 😉
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In curious excitement *Spins stool too hard and lands on the dirty floor* *without rum* 😉
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lol picks you up from dirty floor and buys you a fresh one 😉
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😂 Perfect! Thanks for the rum! 😉😁 Next whiskeys on me!!!
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this has the makings of a loooong night 😉
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Haha!! An all nighter… 😳😁🙌
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it must’ve been several all nighters cause I’m just getting this message now lmao 😉
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Ha! I had all nighters this weekend too!!
At work… 😉😂
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well geez those aren’t exactly the fun all nighters lol
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No not the same… But I make my own fun 🙂
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lol i bet you do!
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😁🤪
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