Let the undertow
take me,
sweeping away
my sins…
Let the waves
crash around me,
smothering from
within…
Let water fill
my lungs,
when I come
up for air…
Let me float
to the shore,
my body cold
and bare.
Let the undertow
take me,
sweeping away
my sins…
Let the waves
crash around me,
smothering from
within…
Let water fill
my lungs,
when I come
up for air…
Let me float
to the shore,
my body cold
and bare.
Anonymously Hal 
Beuatiful poem Annonymously Hal, I liked the last for stanzas at the end. So great ending to a wonderful written love poem.
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Thank you so much! ❤️🙂
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Lovely!
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Thank you!
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Neat loop to this poem. Enjoyed being submersed…for a moment
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Thank you! Glad I could submerse you 😁
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Very beautiful, strong & tender poem, Hal…feeling every word of it 💙
Let me reach to the depths, as I read this artistic & flowic words that you possess ❤️❤️
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Thank you Navin ❤️❤️❤️ reach down if you dare!
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Oh….I’m gonna dive….as in free fall….to reach down ❤️❤️
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❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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This is a beautiful poem and we’ll expressed
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Thank you!
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Challenging for the other. Great write 👏👏👏
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Thank you!
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Love these words
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Thank you!
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Very welcome
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You’ll survive as long as you breath with a purpose of life. Beautiful poem Hal! Your writing is becoming so good ✨ Loving all your poems lately. Hope all is fine over there. 😉👍
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Thank you so much Simon ❤️😁 Much appreciated! Staying safe here! Hope you are also!!! 🙂
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All is well Hal! 🤗 Thanks!
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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